I know a lot of business owners who can talk your ear off about the ins and outs of their business. But sit them down in front of a keyboard and ask them to write a 3 sentence promo for a business-for-sale ad and they don’t know how to start.
If that sounds like you then you are probably trying to do too much with your ad. Writing an effective business for sale ad is simple if you just keep these two facts in mind.
Fact #1: The Goal For Your Advertisement Is To Attract Qualified Buyers And Motivate Them To Request More Information - That’s all!
I’ve read advice elsewhere that says you should include every fact you can about your business in the ad - the more you tell, the more you sell.
I could not disagree more!
You can't sell your business through an ad, you can only hope to locate people who are good prospects and peak their curiosity. Try to tell the reader just enough to get them interested in your business and wanting to know more. The reason this is the best approach is because of Fact #2.
Fact #2: Buyers don't READ online ads, they SCAN them. Buyers scan ads and don't read them because there are so many ads out there -- no one could read them all.
What they will do though, is scan the page looking for a few hot-button words that catch their eye. A high quality prospect will have a general idea of the types of businesses that appeal to him.
He will have certain hot buttons related to:
**Business Type
**Business Location
**Price Range
When he comes across one of his hot buttons, the buyer will then slow down to read more details about that particular business. While scanning the ads the buyer is compiling a short list of businesses with which to follow up. It should be your goal to get on the short-list of high quality buyers while simultaneously being left off the short-list of the unqualified tire kickers.
There is not much you can do about the type, location and price range of your business - they are what they are. So the key to writing a good ad comes down to the "Description" or "Comments" section of the ad.
The thing to remember when writing the comments section of the ad is this: Tell them just enough information to get them interested - but leave them wanting to know more.
Simply mention 3-5 positive elements of your business and spend 1 or 2 sentences describing them.
Some things you want to mention are:
-You have a transferable lease in place with attractive rent and an option to renew
-You are located on the corner of a busy intersection
-You will stay on with the business temporarily for a training period -You have lots of repeat customers
-You have unique or patented products -Sales and profits have been increasing each year.
Earlier, I mentioned that while you want to be on the short list of good prospects, you also want to keep off the list of unqualified prospects.
There are a lot of people with no available cash and bad credit who think they can buy a business. To avoid getting a lot of response from the wrong people, here are some mistakes you want to avoid:
*Under no circumstances should you ever write OBO ("Or Best Offer") next to your asking price. It's sends a signal that you are desperate. Every bottom feeding, low-balling, shark will come out of the woodwork just to see if they can steal your business.
*If you include a reason for selling, make sure it's a positive one such as retirement or to pursue other business opportunities. Every buyer will want to know why you are selling. But now is not the time to let them know you are under the gun due to divorce or illness.
*Don't over hype the business. There is no reason to use phrases like: "OWNER HAS BRAIN DAMAGE! .... IT'S A STEAL AT TWICE THIS PRICE!!!!!!!!!!!
When a prospect reads these kinds of statements he just moves on to the next ad. If the business was really solid, the seller would not have to resort to these sorts of statements.
Here is an example of a well written ad:
Retail Furniture & Design Accessories
Location: British Columbia
Gross: $1,350,000
Net: $150,000
Selling Price: $150,000 + stock, leaseholds
Years Established: 17
# Of Employees: 4
Terms: Negotiable
Comments: High traffic location between a Wal-mart and a shopping mall with excellent lease. Boutique designer style store promoting quality with solid wood and real leather furniture, designer accessories and bedding. Easy operation with trained staff & point of sale computer inventory system. Large positive cash flow with protected product lines and established accounts. Established, loyal clientele creates lots of repeat buyers and referrals. Live and raise your family in a friendly tourism area. We are located in the foothills of the Rockies. The town is a crime free, recreation town with great schools and facilities. Owner is retiring after developing a successful respected business over the last 25 years.
All the information in the "Comments" section is positive and informative without being too long winded. This is a great example of giving people just enough information to get them interested and the prospect now must contact the seller to find out more - which is exactly the situation you want to create!
For a more examples of good (and some not so good) business for sale ads go here: How To Write A Good Business For Sale Ad